That looks good to me! Is that a rattle can paint job?
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In the picture above is one of my rattle can paint jobs. I just paint the whole gun one color and then put stripes with two different colors on the first color. I don't use stencils.
Derby that's exactly what I did just with a kryptic style stencil. Layed the tan dn,then brn,then green. I think the key is what you mentioned about hittin it with stripe passes.
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